vox nihili

This is the story of a medieval girl with Tourette's Syndrome. I have it severely now, it was exacerbated by something that we haven't figured out... but that's beside the ...

Thanks for the review! ;) Cheers! --Vox

The Curses of Elsa A girl with sand-white skin strolled in the common. Tendrils of flaming auburn curls spilled from beneath a kerchief that was tied tightly about her head. ...

Thanks for the review! I can see what you mean... Cheers! --Vox

Cool! I am not any sort of photographer, so please pardon any remarks (and disregard!) if they do not make any sense in the way of electronic art. But I ...

Number one: you must have made the discrepancies in capitalization on purpose. Don't ever do that unless you just want it to look tacky... I'm sorry, but the couplet verse ...

Number one: you seem to be an awesome story teller and a great story-weaver. But you don't do much on the detail, now do you? Try doing more detail. I ...

I think something has to come out of this... for those of you who have read my other poems on Tourette's, they show the brutal nature of my reality. But ...

You have this sort of voice, it just plays through in the first paragraph, that grabs me. Here's my first crit: 'e clouds had wept mercilessly on absolutely every single ...

First off, and don't be offended, but do take this to heart: PUNCTUATION! I know caps isn't pretty, but nor is a poem that has no indication of pause whatsoever. ...

Creepy! Very macrabe, as well. I'd suggest a rating of pg-thirteen. Also, as a heads up, if you write some lame-o post on your own story such as 'oh well, ...

It follows, The silent, dark shadows Of its constance I cannot drive it from my mind. For it is within! A shadow on my soul, For the monster dwells therein. ...

Okay. Now, I might sound overtly literal, but you need, in this poem, unless you're asking what's right or wrong, to choose a side! We readers read it and say ...

I could tell you it sucked, but that would be a lie. I would be proud to draw this. I draw stuff like this all the time. Yes it's worthy ...

yeah. I loved it, but it's NOT true. I mean, it's non-non-fiction. *giggles: double negative, according to math, makes a positive. so I mean it's fiction* Yeah. I will stop ...